在第二版中，他大幅删减了该作品。

He heavily expurgated the work in its second edition.

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纽荷的第二和第三个标准是，这部作品是否带有创作者的印记？即使是在反复观看之后，它是否仍能引起观众的兴趣？

Does the work bear its creator's imprint, and does it draw viewers' interest even after repeated viewings, Newhall's second and third criteria?

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第二个评测科幻作品剧情的标准要看它是否错误的假设未来完全靠科技塑造。

The second test for evaluating a sci-fi scenario is whether it makes the mistake of assuming that technology alone shapes the future.

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I can only imagine though, at this point in the semester, what will become Milton's eventual championing of marriage is pretty hard to imagine, in part because we're just devoting our second class to a literary work given almost entirely to the virtue of chastity.

然而我只能认为，在学期的这个时候，什么将成为弥尔顿婚姻的最终捍卫者,一定难以想象，一部分是因为,我们的第二节课一直在讨论,关于贞洁的美德的作品。

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