这种“金钱剧本”会导致一系列问题，比如工作狂倾向，又或者发财之后的幻灭感。
This script can lead to problems like workaholism, or the disillusionment many feel once they have "made it" financially.
如果你剧本里的角色正在想问题，请不要只告诉我们他在思考。
If a character in your script is thinking about something, don't tell us he's thinking.
再次通读剧本。必要的时候做标记。尤其注意那些你曾经改过的问题部分，并确认他们读起来通顺流畅。
Make notes if necessary. Pay close attention to the problem areas you found in previous drafts and make sure they read smoothly.
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