If you can actually help me with my translation, say, pointing out some of my mistakes, giving me some better sentences, I'll be most appreciated.

如果你真的能帮我做好翻译，比如指出我的错误，或者给出更好的句子，那我很感激。

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You'd better use simple sentences.

你最好使用简单句。

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For years, Baidu really was better able to parse sentences in Chinese.

多年以来，百度的确能更好地分析汉语句子。

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I'd better is a great pattern to use in sentences when you're talking about something that you'd like to do.

在谈论你很乐意做某事时，你可以使用“I'd better”句型。

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Such comparative research might show that America would be safer if it focused more on policing and Europe would do better by increasing sentences.

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But sentences should reflect a better understanding of what works to reduce the "serious matter" of re-offending, he added, saying re-offenders "are likely to commit more serious crime".

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But a big part of the political win goes to Cuomo's decision to tie the assault weapon ban and limit on bullets in magazines to some long-sought Republican objectives to better keep guns from the mentally ill and to stiffen gun crime sentences.

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