仔细看所有拍好的影像并做笔记。看看制片人为拍摄所拟定的大纲，重新校订修改。把所有拍摄看上几遍，记下适合提纲或者能成为好的过渡期的片段和部分。再次修改提纲，要包括所有这些新的内容。
Write out a revised outline. Watch all the footage several times, making notes of clips and segments that can fit in with the outline or would make good transitional moments.
一旦完成就通读你的脚本，看到适合改动的地方就进行修改和校订，以确保它是流畅的。
6read through your script once it is completed. Revise and edit it as you see fit.
附呈的档案显示所做的修改，并且包括已经校订的档案。
Attached are files showing the changes made, and files that have been revised.
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