太多的描述、太多的形容词和副词会使你的叙述变得慢起来，导致读者失去兴趣。

Too much description, too many adjectives and adverbs, can slow up your narrative and cause your readers to lose interest.

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但是以上的叙述或许更适合描述以前的深圳而非未来的深圳。

But that may describe its past more accurately than its future.

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小说将多桩同一事件从不同角度反复描述，读者可以从不同的叙述中了解事件的状况。

Many events in the book are repeatedly described from differing points of view, so the reader learns more about the event from each iteration.

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So the narrative in the first part of Joshua, Joshua 2 to 12, describes the invading Israelites as an organized confederation of 12 tribes whose conquest is accomplished in a few decisive battles under the military leadership of Joshua.

因此《约书亚书》前一部分的叙述，从第2章到12章，描述了侵略者以色列作为有组织的联盟,由12个支派组成，他们在决定性战役中成功征服,在约书亚的军事率领之下。

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