太多的描述、太多的形容词和副词会使你的叙述变得慢起来，导致读者失去兴趣。

Too much description, too many adjectives and adverbs, can slow up your narrative and cause your readers to lose interest.

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但是以上的叙述或许更适合描述以前的深圳而非未来的深圳。

But that may describe its past more accurately than its future.

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在圣地亚哥(San Diego)的一次聚会上，甚至聘请了一位“故事大师”来帮助整合那些描述机器人技术中的惊人变化的叙述。

At one of its meetings in San Diego, it even hired a "master storyteller" to help the group pull together the narrative of the amazing changes in robotic technology.

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So the narrative in the first part of Joshua, Joshua 2 to 12, describes the invading Israelites as an organized confederation of 12 tribes whose conquest is accomplished in a few decisive battles under the military leadership of Joshua.

因此《约书亚书》前一部分的叙述，从第2章到12章，描述了侵略者以色列作为有组织的联盟,由12个支派组成，他们在决定性战役中成功征服,在约书亚的军事率领之下。

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