一整天都盯着单调乏味空洞的网格，并不会帮助你前进一英寸。
Staring at a dull and empty grid all day is not helping you move forward an inch.
除了陈腐与空洞外，这段文字还因为自己的句子结构——对称呆板，节奏单调——而成为败笔。
Apart from its triteness and emptiness, the paragraph above is bad because of the structure of its sentences, with their mechanical symmetry and singsong.
一整天都盯着单调乏味空洞的网格，并不会帮助你前进一英寸。
Staring at a dull and empty grid all day is not helping you move forward an inch .
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