在屏幕上，看起来一切都没问题。而当我在纸质稿上审阅相同的内容时，才会突然意识到文章里的陈词滥调，冗词赘句或哪里太平铺直叙了。

My prose will always look so flawless on the screen, but then I read the same words on the physical page and I suddenly see all my clichés and banalities and excesses.

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冗词，赘语；废话：为了某一意图过多使用词语；冗长。

An excess of words for the purpose; wordiness.

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