Once you have a first draft on paper, you can delete material that is unrelated to your thesis and add material necessary to illustrate your points and make your paper convincing.

一旦你有了论文的第一份草稿，你就可以删除与你的理论不相关的材料，并有必要增加阐释你的观点和让你的论文更有信服力的资料。

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Use examples to bring your points to life.

运用一些例子使您的观点活起来。

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Help illustrate your points with visual AIDS.

直观教具帮助阐明你的观点。

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If your team reaches a goal, you get points for that. If you individually reach a goal, you get points for that.

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And you'll use each of those smiles at different points in your day and in your life.

你可以用其中的任意一种,在你生活的不同日子，不同情形下。

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So, you assign values to very specific states of matter and call those the reference points for your temperature. For instance, freezing of water or boiling of water, the standard ones.

那么你对物质的,某些特殊状态指定数值,把它们叫做你的温度的参考点,比如水的冰点或沸点,它们都是标准。

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The same credit-card issuer may value your points differently depending on how you spend them.

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Since you have not proven your points, it is hard to consider a change.

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Use examples and metaphors from other elements of business, literature, or current events to illustrate your points.

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