Apart from its triteness and emptiness, the paragraph above is bad because of the structure of its sentences, with their mechanical symmetry and singsong.

除了陈腐与空洞外，这段文字还因为自己的句子结构——对称呆板，节奏单调——而成为败笔。

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He works hard day and night as if he never knew triteness.

他日夜拼命工作，好像不知疲倦似的。

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The descriptions have the triteness of screenplay boilerplate, as if the author expected a movie director to evoke the scenes he sets.

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The other problem is that over the past two or three decades we have corrupted our film language in many ways by indulging in over-emphasis, sentimentality, repetition, over-simplification, triteness and being utterly conformist.

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