And there are too many pointless, anonymous quotes.
还有太多的无关紧要的匿名引用。
It has the feel of a manuscript written in a hurry. The structure is messy and the author makes use of too many long quotes, tediously parsing speeches at the expense of providing rigorous analysis.
它留给读者的印象是一部仓促写就的手稿:叙事结构凌乱,长篇引文泛滥,各方言论被加以烦冗的细解,而严密的分析却因此难现其间。
应用推荐