The matter in the essay is satisfactory, but the style needs to be polished up.

文章的内容尚称满意，但其文体仍需改善。

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Regardless of the maximum or number of intervals specified, each defined style needs to have a fade percentage of 00-ff.

不管最大值或指定的间隔数是多少，每个定义的样式都需要有 00-ff 衰减百分比。

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Passing style and tempo are linked. A short passing game works best with a slower tempo, whilst a direct, counter attacking style needs to be swift and quick.

短传和快速配合一般是想关联的，短传球队需要教慢的节奏。直传和反击需要更快的节奏和移动。

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