OK, we'll have a careful look at the content of your case study in a minute, but I just want to make a general comment first, before you start writing your second draft.

好的，我们稍后会仔细看一下你的案例研究的内容，但是在你开始写第二稿之前，我想先做一个大概的评论。

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I've finished the second draft of my book.

我的书已完成了第二稿。

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"I'm currently working on the second draft," said Fellowes this weekend.

“目前我已经在改第二稿了。”Fellowes在本周末说。

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On this day,September seventeenth, he has finished his second draft of the preliminary Emancipation Proclamation.

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At a recent workshop with an author here in Hot Springs, we were told to rewrite the second draft from scratch.

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Security Council earlier this year against a U.S-sponsored second draft resolution that would have opened the way to military action against Iraq.

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That breaks down into 5 hours of research, 39 hours for the first draft, 72 hours for the second draft (including analysis), and so far 11 hours on the third draft which I am probably 60 percent of the way through.

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