Revise the draft to improve its content.

修改草案，完善内容。

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After you cut out those sections, you'll have to go back and revise the rest, to see how it all fits together.

在你删掉那些部分之后，你必须要返回修改剩下的部分，看看它整体如何组合在一起。

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And of course, you'll have to revise the introduction too, to accurately describe what you do in the body of the paper.

当然，你也需要修改引言，以准确描述你在论文主体部分所做的工作。

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He had to revise the book in 2006 to keep up with the changing technology.

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So we revise the personality theory to say, the secret to personal identity is having the same personality-- provided that there's no branching.

所以我们对人格理论稍作修改，提出人格理论的秘诀在于-,给人格提供无分支的前提。

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So we're going to have to revise the P-functioning or the end of P-functioning theory of death.

我们要修改人格功能,或者人格功能的完结代表死亡这一说法。

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Viacom sought to revise the ruling, insisting that YouTube was "willfully blind" of the activity.

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The government must revise the regulations and reject JPMorgan's absurd treatment of anti-hedges as hedges.

CNN: Why JPMorgan gets away with bad bets

These new assumptions revise the way TPC distributes corporate income tax changes to individuals.

FORBES: Who Pays The Corporate Income Tax? Workers Bear The Burden, Too.