Rather than revise to take account of all that has happened in the world of high tech since then, I have made only minor changes of style.

我并没有将自那时以来高科技领域发生的一切补充记录下来，而仅仅是做了文字上的轻微改动。

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We may have to revise this figure upwards.

我们也许要将这个数字往上调一调。

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I can't come out tonight. I have to revise.

我今晚不能出去。我得复习。

《牛津词典》

He had to revise the book in 2006 to keep up with the changing technology.

VOA: standard.2010.01.16

So we need to revise our account of what it is on the physicalist picture to say that you're dead.

我们应该重新修改一下,物理主义学上对死亡的定义。

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So we revise the personality theory to say, the secret to personal identity is having the same personality-- provided that there's no branching.

所以我们对人格理论稍作修改，提出人格理论的秘诀在于-,给人格提供无分支的前提。

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Each time they reread the script to see whether it was worth proceeding, they emerged more determined, even if they had to revise it to fit the diminished budget.

NEWYORKER: Beyond the Matrix

The Securities and Exchange Commission and the Commodity Futures Trading Commission will hold a two-day conference to sort out their respective roles in the Obama administration's plan to revise how to police America's markets.

FORBES: Magazine Article

Just as we in Europe have had to revise our traditional view of Britain as a country living in the past and lagging behind the mainstream of economic and social development, it is time for the British to revise their traditional view of the continent as a potential threat, and show enough courage to join the club.

ECONOMIST: Britain in Europe