Fang Ping loses himself in verbiage which does not tally with the Chinese usage, so that he fails to convey the simple and graceful language characteristic of the original.

由于对原文的质朴简洁缺乏认识以及没能正确使用本国语言，译者使用了不少不符合汉语习惯用法的冗词赘语，以致无法传达出原文优美的语言特征。

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One of my colleague found one and he tracked a long way from Sha Ping Ba to Jie Fang Bei and then to Jiang Bei to exchange this note at the major stores in Chongqing.

有同事找到了一张，从沙坪坝到解放碑再到江北，几乎跑遍了重庆的主流商场，均被商家以无此活动而拒之门外。

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Zhang Ping: Liang Fang, could you please come over here?

张萍：梁芳，你能过来一下吗？

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