Overall Comments: Although the writer gets across his position and ideas, the language used is not very effective and the argument has little depth.
总评:作者基本传达了他的观点和想法,但语言不深刻,论证无深度。
E-mail me the latest draft of this essay by Sunday evening. Please respond to at least 2 classmates' essays-either local comments or overall comments-before next class.
在周日晚上把这篇文章的终稿发给我。在下节课前请对至少两篇同学的文章提出反馈意见-可以是局部的,也可以是全局的。
There were other great comments-some funny, but overall really encouraging to hear so many varied responses.
还有一些精彩的评论——有的非常有趣,但是能收到那么多不同的反馈,对我们来说,真的是莫大的鼓励。
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