His editor, Maxwell Perkins, felt the book was too vague and convinced the author to revise over the next winter.

他的编辑，麦克斯韦·帕金斯认为故事内容不清晰，并说服作者在冬季进行改动。

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"One could get away with more on the summer Riviera, and whatever happened seemed to have something to do with art, " Fitzgerald wrote to his editor, Maxwell Perkins.

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