Do I need to rewrite the thesis to make it more specific to my topic?

我是否需要重写论文，使其更具体到我的主题吗？

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One way to prevent the praise from losing meaning is to make it more specific to the task they completed.

防止表扬无意义化的一种方法是在孩子完成任务后，给出更加具化的赞美。

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Instead of having a rule that vaguely says, "Don't act up inthe store, " make it more specific by saying, "No whining, crying, yelling, screaming, complaining or screaming in the store."

于其模糊地说“不要在商店里这样表现”不如将其说的更加具体“不要在商场里抱怨，哭，叫喊，尖叫，埋怨” 。

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The feeling that bad situations are the result of bad luck, difficulty, or an external event more specific can make it more difficult to succeed financially over the long term.

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It is important for us to make sure that we're able to get more specific information about what exactly is happening there.

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If you can plan ahead for education spending, it may make more sense to contribute to a traditional retirement account rather than a college-specific account.

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