Once you have a first draft on paper, you can delete material that is unrelated to your thesis and add material necessary to illustrate your points and make your paper convincing.

一旦你有了论文的第一份草稿，你就可以删除与你的理论不相关的材料，并有必要增加阐释你的观点和让你的论文更有信服力的资料。

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It is reported that since 2006, before any new major policy or law goes into force, a draft version has been put on the Internet for criticism to help make improvements.

据报导，2006年以来所有重大的政策或法律在颁布前都会在网上公布草案文本，征求建议。

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Firstly, it makes a research on the forming of neighboring right in our country and make an introduction on the current system Civil Code Draft concerning neighboring right in our country.

首先对我国相邻权制度的历史进行了考察，介绍和评析了我国现行的相邻权制度和我国《民法典》(草案)相邻权部分的规定。

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And Chancellor George Osborne and Treasury Minister Mark Hoban are before the Joint Committee on the Draft Financial Services Bill to discuss how to make us safe from a future banking crisis - that's at 3.45pm.

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