If it's a succession of one chunky paragraph after another, your characters are talking too much in speeches.

如果全篇都是一个挨一个的肥胖的段落，这也就意味着你的角色在吐沫横飞地做演讲了。

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There were no grandparents willing to look after us in the Chinese style, and we were looked after by a succession of different women, one after another.

那时候我们没有像传统中国般的方式有祖父母照顾我们，我们连续地被不同的女性照看，一个又一个。

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