This remark did not appear in revised edition of the work.

这一评述在作品的修订版中没有出现。

youdao

Each piece will be initially submitted as a first version and later, in revised form.

每一份作品会在最初以第一次的版本以及之后的修改版本缴交。

youdao

There will be four major writing assignments; you will submit each assignment in a first version (not a "rough draft") and later, in revised form.

你们将会缴交四份写作作业，每份作业你们会缴交第一次的版本(并非“草稿”)，以及之后的修改版本。

youdao

However,the Orthodox Church in America says most of its members follow the revised Julian calendar and celebrate on December twenty-fifth.

VOA: special.2009.12.21

That revisions may have been made, so that you might have different sources that have been revised or put together in different ways. Right?

这些修订，以便于你可以对,不同的素材，以不同方式，进行修改或者重组？

耶鲁公开课 - 旧约导论课程节选

Wright revised this image in those drafts.

进行了修改。

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Government, which lost 7, 000 jobs in March, gained 14, 000 in revised February numbers, notching its first monthly increase since September.

WSJ: Economy Adds 88,000 Jobs

The number of jobs created in September was revised to 158, 000 from the previously reported 103, 000, and hiring in August was revised up to 104, 000 from the previously reported 57, 000.

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Finally, note that there are just 14 words in the revised sentence, compared with 19 in the original, and that nine of them are one-syllable, three are two-syllable and two are three-syllable.

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