As a college student, I like online shopping but I expected that effective measures should be taken to make it better.

作为一名大学生，我喜欢网上购物，但我预计，应采取有效措施，使之更好。

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Personally, I like shopping online, because I can save much money and time by doing so.

就我个人而言，我喜欢网购，因为这为我节约了很多时间和金钱。

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But my plan is disturbed, because I like to play one time, I will go out shopping, be online or dinner with my good sister. My time will always be a waste in here.

可是我的计划总是会被破坏，因为我喜欢玩，一有时间，我就会和寝室里的人出门逛街或者上网，我们的时间总是会放在这里。

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