Ask your lecturer or tutor for feedback on your draft so you can improve it before handing in your essay. (Some markers will give feedback on a draft, some won't. )

询问你的老师或导师对你初稿的反馈，这样你可以在递交你的文章之前进行修改提高。（有些标记会给反馈草稿，有些不会。）

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There are milder options, including the so-called "double majority" proposal favoured by this newspaper, which would give English MPs a right to rewrite or veto draft legislation on English issues.

在更中庸的选项中，本报支持一个被称作“双重多数”的提议，也就是说英格兰国会议员将被授权改写或否决有关英格兰事务的立法草案。

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The consultation, which will close on 23 October, wants individuals and groups to give their views on whether a draft Operating Agreement reflects the agreement made in 2011.

BBC: and S4C agreement public consultation launched