Apart from its triteness and emptiness, the paragraph above is bad because of the structure of its sentences, with their mechanical symmetry and singsong.
除了陈腐与空洞外，这段文字还因为自己的句子结构——对称呆板，节奏单调——而成为败笔。
The above paragraph has used the concept of the historical thinking-the continuity and change, which may be judged from the comparisons between some aspects in the present and the past.
以上款采用了历史思维-的连续性和变化，这可能与现在和过去某些方面的比较来判断的概念。
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