Once you have a first draft on paper, you can delete material that is unrelated to your thesis and add material necessary to illustrate your points and make your paper convincing.

一旦你有了论文的第一份草稿，你就可以删除与你的理论不相关的材料，并有必要增加阐释你的观点和让你的论文更有信服力的资料。

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It is reported that since 2006, before any new major policy or law goes into force, a draft version has been put on the Internet for criticism to help make improvements.

据报导，2006年以来所有重大的政策或法律在颁布前都会在网上公布草案文本，征求建议。

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Once you have a first draft on paper, you can delete material that in unrelated to your thesis and add material necessary to illustrate your points and make your paper convincing.

一旦你拥有了纸上的第一幅图片，你可以删除那些无法阅读的文章和为了使你的观点更让人信服的举例和增加观点的相关增加材料。

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And Chancellor George Osborne and Treasury Minister Mark Hoban are before the Joint Committee on the Draft Financial Services Bill to discuss how to make us safe from a future banking crisis - that's at 3.45pm.

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