那样写能够让读者注意作品的内容与意义，而不是作者的心情和情绪。

Write in a way that draws the reader's attention to the sense and substance of the writing, rather than to the mood and temper of the author.

youdao

人们不太注意他们周围的环境和日常生活，所以当作家们描绘这些时，可能会让人感觉他们正举步维艰地引导读者。

People don't notice their everyday surroundings and daily routine, so when writers describe them it can sound as if they're trying too hard to instruct the reader.

youdao

因此，除了让你潜在的页面读者吓一大跳，为什么不创造一些有创意的、悦目的页面来引起访问者的注意呢？

So instead of scaring your potential page viewers and customers, why not create something creative and more pleasant for the eye to catch your visitor's attention?

youdao

Why is he calling attention, in other words, to this logical disparity?

为什么要让读者，注意到他逻辑上的矛盾呢？

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