几年以后，当我再读我的第一首诗时，发现它的确写得很糟糕。

A few years later I took a second look at that first poem; it was a pretty lousy poem.

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回到1982年，我卖掉的第一首诗叫做“流产”，最先发表在《生育》杂志上。

Back in 1982, the first piece of writing I ever sold was a poem called "the Miscarriage," which originally appeared in Mothering magazine.

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（孟加拉儿童初级读本里的韵文---原注）在学习这样的词句前，我刚经过像kara khala这样的双音练习的狂轰滥炸；我念着“天上淅沥下雨，树叶婆娑摇曳”，这对于我来说是“原始诗人”的第一首诗。

I am just come to anchor after crossing the stormy region of the kara, khala[2] series; and I am reading "The rain patters, the leaf quivers, " for me the first poem of the Arch Poet.

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