这个练习的全部意义就在于,卡罗尔这首诗诗节的结构就是在告诉学生们,要写出一个有意义的句子,他们必须注意其结构。
The point of it all says Fish is that the structure of Carroll's stanza provides all the clues they need to design a sentence that makes sense.
他挑出一个例子, John Updike对于全垒打的评论—“它在书里的同时仍然在天空中”—并问,写出这样的句子有多难?
He singles out, for instance, John Updike’s remark about a great homerun—“It was in the books while it was still in the sky”—and asks, how hard is it to write a sentence like this?
菲什有点像一个鉴赏句子的行家,他说写出一个好句子是一个精细的活-----但它是可以通过学习习得的。
Fish is something of a sentence connoisseur, and he says writing a fine sentence is a delicate process — but it's a process that can be learned.
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