记住，无论如何，冗长的句子并不一定代表流畅。
Keep in mind, however, that long sentences don't necessarily indicate fluency.
要毫不保留地挑出那些糟糕的、冗长的用词，表意不明的句子或段落，仔细润色。
Awkward or wordy phrasing or unclear sentences and paragraphs should be mercilessly poked and prodded into shape.
如果简介中存在很多没有什么意义的冗长句子，这就表明你没有花费很多心思或时间来描写你的约会简介。
If there are a lot of sentences that don't make sense, it will show that you haven't put in much thought or time into writing your dating profile.
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