The several points about our experience mentioned towards the end of your outline are well written, but I suggest you consider adding one or two more.

你们提纲中最后的几条经验写得不错，还可以考虑再加一两条。

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Outline your lesson plans and general approach to this project concluding with details of what you would expect your pupils to have achieved at the end of this five-week course.

写出您的课程计划和大体教学方式，包括直至这五星期课程结束时，您期望您的学生所能达到的目标等细节。

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At the end of the speech, Foucault then sketched the outline of "biopower", which was a kind of power that was exercised generally to population, life and quick.

演讲的最后，福柯又勾画出“生命权力”的轮廓：总体上运用于人口、生命和活人的权力。

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George Mitchell, studied the Israeli-Palestinian violence and offered an outline on how to end it.

CNN: El-Baz

Its flying permit lapsed at the end of last year and regulators have asked the airline to outline how it plans to secure its future before renewing it.

BBC: Kingfisher Airlines submits new revival plan

The outline design phase is due to be completed by the end of 2010.

BBC: Designs for Northampton railway station