Is my thesis statement concise and clear?

我的论点陈述是否够简介和清晰？

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Grammar, punctuation, concise and clear writing.

语法，标点符号，简洁和明确的书写。

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It is concise and clear under the certain circumstances.

在某种情况下它是简单明了的。

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Both Obama and Romney have done a poor job of communicating a clear and concise message for their campaigns.

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He described their emotions as "completely contrasting" with Mrs Philpott clearly distressed and saying very little, while Mr Philpott was "very clear and concise about events the night before, and showed little emotion".

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We offer a simple first step that builds on the broad body of research and the undeniable truth that clear, complete and concise communication regarding the most significant issues facing a country is a foundation of good governance.

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