An elegant turn of phrase would not be amiss.

使用切确的转折语。

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A little of your most delicate orange scent would not be amiss.

再洒上一点儿你那最最美好的桔子香水，那也怪不错的。

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If you know what their voice normally sounds like, and when they answer a tricky question their voice sounds higher than usual, something may be amiss.

如果你知道他们平常时的声音，那么当他们以高于平时的声音回答一个狡猾的问题时，可能就有些问题了。

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Well, as I say, there seems to be something amiss about that reaction.

就像我说的，似乎那种反应时有些问题的。

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However, I have three insights relative to what I believe may be amiss with this piece, although much of the advice is solid from the investing perspective.

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Relying on this abundant user feedback, as well as lab testing, the company began to isolate what exactly was amiss and, along the way, discovered what it meant for a product to be truly wearable.

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