“Physics of the Future” has few sentences so bad that you can tweezer them, like splinters from your toe, and put them on display.
《未来的物理》中的一些句子是如此糟糕,以致你能像从脚趾头上拔刺一般,用镊子把它们夹出来并拿去展览。
They finish your sentences, they remember the cat that ran away when you were twelve, and they tell you the truth when you’ve had a bad haircut.
他们会接完你没说完的句子,他们记得在你十二岁时跑掉的那只猫,如果你剪了一个很糟糕的发型,他们会跟你说实话。
Apart from its triteness and emptiness, the paragraph above is bad because of the structure of its sentences, with their mechanical symmetry and singsong.
除了陈腐与空洞外,这段文字还因为自己的句子结构——对称呆板,节奏单调——而成为败笔。
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