It may be a good idea to ask your American friends to look at the way you're writing, and give you some suggestions for improvement.

让你的美国朋友看看你的写作方式，并给你一些改进的建议，也许是个好主意。

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The surgery took some hours after which the doctor went out happy, "Thank goodness! Your son is saved!" And without waiting for the father's reply he carried on his way running by saying, "If you have any questions, ask the nurse."

手术进行了几个小时，之后医生高兴地走了出去，说：“谢天谢地！你的儿子得救了！”然后不等病人父亲回应，他边向前跑边说：“如果你有任何问题，问护士。”

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If someone gets hurt along the way we ask for forgiveness.

如果有人因此受伤那也只能请求宽恕。

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To begin to answer this question you might say even begin to think about it in the right way requires that we stand back from Aristotle's text for a while and ask some fundamental questions about it.

若要开始回答这个问题,你也甚至可以说,开始以正确的方式思考这个问题,需要我们,暂时放下亚里士多德的大作,回头提问一些基本的问题。

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Another way to use the "What if" question is to ask for advice.

另一种使用 “What if”问句的情况是征求建议的时候。

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"Think smart, be active, be committed, rebuild the organization, ask for the vote in the right way, and speak boldly and proudly about our universal principles in a way that attracts support of your fellow Californians, " he said.

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Ask for feedback from trusted colleagues about the way you are coming across.

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And to do that, the manufacturer or service supplier can no longer (as with mass customization) ask for a one-way flow of information from the customer.

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