Your essay needs (a) structure.

你这篇文章组织不好。

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Since this is something we can all identify with, I think it will help us see the relationship between the function of a structure and its style or form.

既然这是我们都能认同的东西，我认为它将帮助我们看到一个结构的功能和它的风格或形式之间的关系。

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Once synthesized, the histones move into the cell nucleus, where a section of DNA wraps around them to form a structure that resembles beads, or knots, on a string.

一旦合成，组蛋白就会进入细胞核，细胞核内的 DNA 片段会将组蛋白包裹起来，形成一种类似串珠或绳结的结构。

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Not only did the always interesting Lady Gaga show up inside a large egg-like structure, but unknown artists also won top prizes.

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There is a self-consciousness in the thinking about structure that we find in many places in Levi-Strauss that Derrida freely acknowledges in his essay.

在列维的作品中,我们能找到多处对结构认识的自觉,德里达在自己的论文中也承认了这种自觉的正确性。

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Then the--so the term structure was downward-sloping until about two and a half years and then it was upward sloping.

期限结构线先向下倾斜,在到期期限过了两年半的时点后,才缓慢回升

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For more help in deciding which structure is the best fit for your business, check out a helpful resource on the SBA's Web site, the choose-a-structure feature.

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As far as the defeat of the Taliban is concerned, they are defeated, they are gone - as a movement, as a government, as a structure, a political structure, a religious structure - they are not there.

BBC: Breakfast with Frost

Ward Ferry's fund charges a management fee of 1.5% and takes 15% of profits as a performance fee-a typical fee structure for a hedge-fund.

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