revising_the_first_draft_有道手机词典

1.He's now revising the first draft of his essay.
他目前正修改他的文章初稿。
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2.He 's now revising the first draft of his essay.
他目前正修改他的文章初稿。
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3.By the second half of 2013, the first draft of the book was officially released. While editing and revising the manuscript is extremely complex.
到2013年下半年，《全书》第一稿正式出炉。而编审和修改稿件也是极为复杂的。
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