The sentence doesn't read smoothly.

句子不通顺。

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Make notes if necessary. Pay close attention to the problem areas you found in previous drafts and make sure they read smoothly.

再次通读剧本。必要的时候做标记。尤其注意那些你曾经改过的问题部分，并确认他们读起来通顺流畅。

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His works read smoothly.

他的作品读起来很流畅。

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His works read smoothly.

他的作品读起来很流畅。

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