于是就开始促使我作文字工作。
老师删掉了我作文中一些多余的词。
The teacher cancelled some unnecessary words in my composition.
爸爸在我作文里找出一大堆拼写错误。
老师指出我作文中的错误。
他指出了我作文中的错误。
老师在我作文中发现许多拼写和文法错误。
The teacher found many faults in spelling and grammar in my composition.
我父亲在我作文里发现了好几个拼写错误。
My father spotted several spelling mistakes in my composition.
老师把我作文中用得不当的几个单词删掉了。
My teacher crossed off several incorrect words in my composition.
我读了故事书、英语书和作文书。
我走上台，读了我的作文《我父亲的儿子》。
在制作文具包的时候，我意识到我忽略了它背后的真正含义。
While making the kits, I realized that I had lost sight of the true meaning behind it.
渐渐地，我对文学产生了极大的兴趣，上学期我在我市中学生作文比赛中获得了一等奖。
Little by little, I took a great interest in literature, and last term I won the first prize in the composition contest among high school students in our city.
我甚至开始在作文时运用破折号。
但同时我也害怕英语课，害怕读书报告和作文。
But I was also scared of them, scared of book reports and essays.
老师：克莱德，你那篇关于“我的狗”的作文和你哥哥的一样。
TEACHER: Clyde, your composition on 'My Dog' is exactly the same as your brother's.
天啊，昨天我答应帮你修改中文作文，我怎么把这件事给忘了呢？ 真的好对不起。
LL: Wait, Li Hua, you promised me yesterday that you would proofread my Chinese composition.
他指着在他作文上用红笔圈的字说道，“我看不出关于这个字你在边页上写的是什么。”
Pointing to a word the professor had circled in his essay, he said, "I can't read what you wrote about it in the margin, sir."
今天我想做的是给你们灌输一些有关这种写作文体的概念。
Today what I want to do is give you some sense of this body of writing.
例如，我决定不再需要打字机了，因为现在我只用计算机作文字处理，于是我决定把它赠送给别人。
For example, I decided I no longer needed my typewriter, as I only used my computer for word processing now, so I decided to give it away.
写作文，我只会一种模式，点题、举例子、总结。
When writing I use only one mode: signpost take examples and conclude.
我听说了，你读本科的时候是写作高手，论文和学期作文都难不倒你。
Ll: Well, when I was an undergraduate, I would just crank out essays and term papers, no problem.
我敢肯定没那么严重。你这是第一年上英语作文课吧？
I'm sure it isn't that serious. Is this your first year taking English writing classes?
我在纽约州北部一所大学的英语系教书，就是说时不时会上大一的作文课，那种论文写作速成班。
I teach in the English department at a college in upstate New York, which every now and then means teaching freshman comp, a kind of crash course on writing coherent papers.
我曾经是一名英语教师，而我能给学生布置的最恐怖的作业，就是写作文。
I used to be an English teacher and the most dreaded task that I could assign my students was to write a short essay.
一次她在作文中这么写道：“我是幸运的，虽然失去了双臂，但我仍然还有腿；我是幸运的，虽然折断了翅膀，但我的心依旧飞翔。”
Though I lost my arms, I still have legs; I am lucky. Though my wings are broken, my heart can still fly.
我乘热打铁，要求学生写一篇作文，介绍其祖国文化中的一个谚语。 第二天，作文交了上来。
I asked my students to write acomposition about a proverb in his or her own country.
我对她说,对于她的作文, 我已经没有什么好改的了,因为她已经基本掌握了作文的写作方法, 文章的结构, 内容编排以及词汇语法都已达到相当的水平, 完全符合高级的要求, 如果再改的话恐怕就是朝满分作文努力了.
I said to her that for her composition, I could hardly make any correction or revision, because she has got the hang of it in terms of writing skills, structures, vocabulary and grammar.
我对她说,对于她的作文, 我已经没有什么好改的了,因为她已经基本掌握了作文的写作方法, 文章的结构, 内容编排以及词汇语法都已达到相当的水平, 完全符合高级的要求, 如果再改的话恐怕就是朝满分作文努力了.
I said to her that for her composition, I could hardly make any correction or revision, because she has got the hang of it in terms of writing skills, structures, vocabulary and grammar.
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