如果我的表达有错误你可以帮我纠正好吗?。

Couls you correct me if any mistake found in my expression?

youdao

如果我出现错误，你必须打断我的说话并且纠正我的错误。

If I'm wrong, you must stop me and put me right.

youdao

如果你不介意我就来纠正你的错误好吗？

Would I correct the mistakes to you if you don't mind?

youdao

如果你不介意我就来纠正你的错误好吗？

Would I correct the mistakes to you if you don't mind?

youdao