You composition is very good except some words were transliterate wrong!
除了一些拼写错误之外你的作文很好。
There is something wrong with her computer and some words are missing.
她的电脑出了点问题，丢失了一些单词。
If I make some mistakes, I use my rubber to erase the wrong words.
假如我写错了，我便用橡皮把写错的字擦失降。
If I make some mistakes, I use my rubber to erase the wrong words.
假如我写错了，我便用橡皮把写错的字擦失降。
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