当你写完脚本后，别着急着改，先放上几天，然后尝试着以初读者的心态去阅读你的脚本，想一想这个故事是否合乎逻辑，是否清晰，是否有趣。
Then read through the script again. Try to read it as though you were a stranger reading this for the first time.
考虑到周末初的情况，我想结果是能够接受滴。
Well, considering the way the weekend started out, I think the results were pretty reasonable.
是，我也那样想。他初进公司时是很修长的。
Yes, I think so, too. He is so slim when he first joined the company.
绝对不是，先生。我只是想挪到下星期。 下周初我会空闲得多。
绝对不是，先生。我只是想挪到下星期。 下周初我会空闲得多。
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