Notice how very casual Yeats is in that second strophe, how self-consciously fantastic and speculative he is.

注意叶芝在第二节,是多么随意，多么自觉的神奇,多么敏锐。

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Notice Thomas's really superb nonchalance and offhandedness and simplicity. "It was late June." "The steam hissed."

注意托马斯绝好的冷淡随意和简单,“那是六月下旬“，“蒸气咝咝“

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Notice the freedom that he exercises in unfolding what feels like an improvisatory monologue in which he makes you race to keep up with him as he follows a semi-hidden logic that he treats as self-evident.

注意他随意地展开,一段即席的独白,让所有人都跟随他的脚步,而他跟随着自己若隐若现的但自认为显而易见的逻辑。

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