This is fine, but if you can also show potential employers you have most of the qualities listed above – preferably with examples – you will almost certainly become a more attractive candidate.

这当然没有错，但是如果你也能展示你还同时具备的的以上所列的几条素质——最好能有相关的事例——会让你成为更受欢迎的候选人！

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This is fine, but if you can also show potential employers you have most of the qualities listed above – preferably with examples – you will almost certainly become a more attractive candidate.

这当然没有错，但是如果你也能展示你还同时具备的的以上所列的几条素质——最好能有相关的事例——会让你成为更受欢迎的候选人！

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