Please correct this mistake.

请改正这个错误。

youdao

To practice my English, I write an English Daily as much as possible. Please correct it if I made any mistake. Thank you! This is my first one.

为了提高英文，我尽量写双语日记，这也是我第一篇英文日记，欢迎各位朋友纠正我的错误(改善表达)！谢谢！

youdao

To practice my English, I write an English Daily as much as possible. Please correct it if I made any mistake. Thank you! This is my first one.

为了提高英文，我尽量写双语日记，这也是我第一篇英文日记，欢迎各位朋友纠正我的错误(改善表达)！谢谢！

youdao