You may have a translation that flows better than does the official one, you may find a translation error, and other possibilities.
你可能会发现一个比我们的更好的译法，发现一个翻译错误，或者其它可能。
You may have a translation that flows better than does the official one, you may find a translation error, and other possibilities.
你可能会发现一个比我们的更好的译法，发现一个翻译错误，或者其它可能。
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