Can you look over my composition for me?
你能帮我检查一下我的作文吗？
Please point out the mistakes in my composition, if any.
如果有的话，请指出我作文的错误。
I was so happy because the teacher singled my composition out and read part of it in front of the class.
老师把我的作文挑出来在班上朗读，我真是太高兴了。
The teacher added a note to my composition.
老师给我的作文加了评语。
I worked on my composition for hours last night.
昨晚我写作文写了好几个小时。
I got my composition corrected.
我请别人改我的作文。
我的作文还是不好吗？
Welcome to correct my composition.
欢迎大家修正我的文章。
What do you think of my composition?
你认为我的作文怎么样？
I have finished writing my composition.
我的作文写完了。
What is your opinion about my composition?
你对我的作文有何看法？
My teacher found my composition satisfactory.
老师发现我的作文还令人满意。
Must I hand in my composition this afternoon?
我今天下午必须交作文吗？
He pointed out the mistakes in my composition.
他指出了我作文中的错误。
I had not finished my composition when the bell rang.
当铃响的时候，我还没完成作文。
I write my composition both in English and in Chinese.
我用英文和中文写作文。
The teacher pointed out the defects in my composition.
老师指出了我文章中的不足。
I have not finished my composition when the bell rang.
铃响的时候，我还没完成作文。
The teacher pointed out the mistakes in my composition.
老师指出我作文中的错误。
Can you have a look at my composition I wrote yesterday?
可以帮我看一下我昨天写的作文吗？
Dad found a bundle of spelling mistakes in my composition.
爸爸在我作文里找出一大堆拼写错误。
Please remind me that I must hand in my composition today.
请提醒我今天必须交作文。
I had finished writing my composition by 10:00 this morning.
今天上午10：00点以前，我已经写完了我的作文。
My father spotted several spelling mistakes in my composition.
我父亲在我作文里发现了好几个拼写错误。
The teacher cancelled some unnecessary words in my composition.
老师删掉了我作文中一些多余的词。
The teacher cancelled some unnecessary words in my composition.
老师删掉了我作文中一些多余的词。
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