几年以后，当我再读我的第一首诗时，发现它的确写得很糟糕。

A few years later I took a second look at that first poem; it was a pretty lousy poem.

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回到1982年，我卖掉的第一首诗叫做“流产”，最先发表在《生育》杂志上。

Back in 1982, the first piece of writing I ever sold was a poem called "the Miscarriage," which originally appeared in Mothering magazine.

youdao

（孟加拉儿童初级读本里的韵文---原注）在学习这样的词句前，我刚经过像karakhala这样的双音练习的狂轰滥炸；我念着“天上淅沥下雨，树叶婆娑摇曳”，这对于我来说是“原始诗人”的第一首诗。

I am just come to anchor after crossing the stormy region of the kara, khala[2] series; and I am reading "The rain patters, the leaf quivers, " for me the first poem of the Arch Poet.

youdao

我儿子写出他第一首诗的时候，我就知道他有天赋。

I know my son got talent when be composed his first poem.

youdao

为此，在三十年前，当我在离别故乡的远途写作第一首诗歌时，我就暗暗发誓：此一生，我不会让一个不洁的文字入诗。

For this, thirty years ago, when I wrote the first poem on the way of parting homeland, I had sworn inwardly: in lifetime, I will not let an unclean word get in poem.

youdao

我想这位诗人在写她的第一首诗时大约20岁。

I guess the poet would have been about 20 when she wrote her first poem.

youdao

当他组成了他的第一首诗，我知道我的儿子得到天分。

I knew my son got talent when he composed his first poem.

youdao

我儿子写出他第一首诗的时候，我就知道他有天赋。

I knew my son got talent when he composed his first poem.

youdao

我儿子写出他第一首诗的时候，我就知道他有天赋。

I knew my son got talent when he composed his first poem.

youdao