这个故事中最富有戏剧性的结构发生在落幕的时候,我们所看到的一系列的对话和遭遇都发生在这个时间段。
The main dramatic architecture of this story takes place off-screen and what we see are series of conversations and encounters sort of in between those moments.
把对话放到最后写,记住一部电影真正的戏剧性潜藏在角色的话语和行动之下。
Write dialogue last and remember that the real drama of a film is underneath what is being said and done.
我也采用其它方式练习写作,比如一边走路,一边进行戏剧性的对话,在对话中我扮演好几个角色,然后再凭着记忆把对话写下来。
But I worked in other ways also; I often accompanied my walks with dramatic dialogues, in which I played many parts; and often exercised myself in writing down conversations from memory.
我也采用其它方式练习写作,比如一边走路,一边进行戏剧性的对话,在对话中我扮演好几个角色,然后再凭着记忆把对话写下来。
But I worked in other ways also; I often accompanied my walks with dramatic dialogues, in which I played many parts; and often exercised myself in writing down conversations from memory.
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