在评阅你的草稿时，我会写下广泛的评语，和为建议一些修改方案。

In reviewing your drafts, I will make extensive comments and suggest some options in revision.

youdao

在评阅你的草稿时，我会写下广泛的评语，和为建议一些修改方案。

In reviewing your drafts, I will make extensive comments and suggest some options in revision.

youdao